On Sunday morning my mum and l went to the park in Kaitaia to play on the park.
First I went to play on the slide. It was cool.
Next l played on the monkey bars.
After that me and my mum went to the shop to get some lollies because I wanted some lollies.
Then we went back home to get my dad and we went to Mcdonalds and we went back home.
We were learning about...Recount Writing
I found it easy to...tell my readers when my story happened.
I found it hard to...think of juicy words.
I really enjoyed...writing about what happened.
Next time I need to…hurry up.
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